[IELTS] 고등학교 졸업 후 바로 취업 vs 대학교육

While it is argued that

 

 

> there are benefits to getting a job straight after school,(그냥 단순 요약)

 

I would have to support the idea that  

 

> it is better to go to college or uiversity

 

There are arguments in favor of 

> the option to start work straight after school.

 

One of the reasons is that 

>many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible

 

In this way, 

> they can become independent, ant they will be able to afford their own house or start a family.

 

Another reason is that

> in terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly.

They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession.

This may lead to promotions an da successful career.

 

On the other hand, in my view, 

 

> It is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.

 

Firstly, 

> academic qualifications are required in many professions.

For example, 

> it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having their relevant degree.

 

As a result,

> university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications.

 

 

Secondly, I also feel that ,

> without qualifications from a university or college, young people will not compete in modern society.

 

This is because

> the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company

 

 

 

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that

 

students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.